Hi ! My name is
Deniz. I’m 32 years old.I had dreamt to be a business woman since I was a
child,and now I’m a business woman. I graduated from METU.I’m working in a
prestigious international company in Italy.I often travel around the world
because I’m in one of the highest position in this company.I have to say that I
earn a lot of money,but it doesn’t mean I’m happy.I have already been
married,but my marriage didn’t work.As a consequence,we divorced after 15
months. My ex-husband was a business man too,and he used to work a lot. He didn’t
use to take care of me and my needs. He only used to bring me lots of presents
to make me forgive his absence. After many argues, I tried to ask him to be
ever-present in my life. I decided to divorce,so now I’m looking for a man who
doesn’t give me flowers,but he gives me his love ! I have more than enough money;therefore,I
don’t care whether he whom I’m looking for is rich or not. Whatsmore,now I’m
talking about my hobies. I’am always in office. I want to be in nature because
it makes me feel relaxed,so I like mountain hiking and also, I have chalet
where I go every Sunday. I like animals. I have a dog whose name is Pavlov. He
is my best friend.He is getting more and more faithful to me day by day. I don’t
like cats because when I was a child a cat bit me;for this reason, I haven’t liked
cats since then. In addition to liking animals,I like reading books so much, but I
don’t have enough time to read dueto my work. I also enjoy doing ice skating. It’s
very awesome activity. What about my personality ? I am a fastidious person. In other
words, it’s hard to please me. I’m a serious woman owing to my job besides my
fastidious quality. Unfortunately,I am also a cleaning addict woman. I have a
memory about this quality. One day, when
I was university, my friend and me were watching movie on the Internet. While we
were watching,I was cleaning my computer’s screen, so my friend was angry at
me, but it is beyond my control. I think I gave enough information about
myself. I have a lot of work to do. I am teaching business course to 24
business student from different countries these days.
If you are
interested in me, you can contact with me. Here is my number: 09873186305
I hope I will be
happy. I
am waiting for you..
I think you should say"have dreamt" instead of "had dreamt" in the third sentence.
YanıtlaSilBut there I'm talking about my child dream almost 20 years ago.
YanıtlaSil''I have to say that I earn a lot of money,so it doesn’t mean I’m happy.'' you used ''so'' but I think it must be ''but''.
YanıtlaSilyou should have said 'in addition to liking the animals' i think.
YanıtlaSilthank you friends I will correct them :)
YanıtlaSilthere are two mısspelıng words . boks should be books and awsome should be awesome . btw ı really lıke your ımagınary character.:)
YanıtlaSilI forgot some letters :) Thank you so much for your helps :)
YanıtlaSilIt was a great story and I really enjoyed while reading thank you :) But I think you have a mistake that nobody told before. I think you should't use plural form of "work" word because it is an uncountable verb. :)
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